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[Cyrus Darke]

Excuse me, sorry about that. What were you saying?

[Kelrik Frostbane]

Oh yea btw sorry I havnt been posting or RPing as much I got a major semester long report i've been doing...and in my down time I've been occupied with these short stories I'm working on soo

[Aries96]

No prawb, dawg.

The amazingness of misspelling

[Kelrik Frostbane]

Hey guys, wanna sample of a few of the things im writing? Well just one thing.... a poem i call The Locked Door.

[Kelrik Frostbane]

its pretty err...dark, i tried to make it have a bit of a touch of Edgar Allan Poe in it >;D

[Cyrus Darke]

Sure as long as it's not inappropriate. What else are you writing besides poetry?

[Kelrik Frostbane]

Ive started a few short stories oh and here it is....






The Closed Door


I watch from the window, the setting sun
begining of a cycle, where madness shall run
Where there's voices heard, though there's no one to utter a word
Where shadows creep about the hall, the clamor of their steps are of an unatural thrall
But the most peculiar of instances happens behind a locked door, meant never to be opened, not anymore...

There you see... every evening, dances a woman fair, with an expression ever so gleaming
A spectre of beauty far surpassed, for which my heart is quite fond, to its very last
The grace of her movements, the look in her eyes, makes me almost break down and cry...

For I lost the key in the days long passed, Where did i loose it?, to myself I've always asked...
So I search and I search till my quest is prolonged, for rest I have gone without, for far too long
But then one day as I passed the door, I notice a small object protruding through the floor...
Could it possibly be? My mind must be gone, for in my hand I held the key, and overjoyed i'd become!

The hours passed, and the sun had fell, the voices and shadows oh how they began to swell...
they begged and pleaded for me not to open the door,which until now was not meant to be opened, anymore...
Ignoring their pleas I made it to the door, oh there was nothing more I've ever wanted in the years before....

At the door I turned the key, oh how the joy could have burst my heart that now beat profoundly
The room was untouched, as if time had never passed, after many-a-year I could enter at last!
And there she stood, with beauty unknown, her presence, that of a gentle tone
I walked to her as if in a trance, ready to join her in her graceful dance.

We danced and danced to the radiant moonlight, oh how could I ever describe such a sight?
After countless hours passed the morning light began to show, from under the door it did glow
I wanted to go rest for i was tired, from the dancing that last night was transpired
But she gripped my hand in a deathly vice, and i watched as the colors faded from her eyes...

Her complexion had faded and her flesh had gone, only to show nothing but skin and bone!
The beauty that i once saw was now a mere corpse, horror struck me as I looked at myself...i had taken the same course!
I let out a scream before i passed, and for now and forever we shall everlast...
And to the very hour where the deathy dance began... begins the cycle where my madness first ran.

[Kelrik Frostbane]

Well dang the sites chatbox isnt big enough to make the lines look in their proper form....
D: which kinda messes it up a bit but if you get my general rhyme scheme you can prolly pick up on how i have it set up

[Cyrus Darke]

Wow...(eskelato accent from nacho libre)"you could be die bayst writer who ever leeved!"

[Aries96]

That was really good. I write a bit of poetry myself, but it's really lame.

[Aries96]

But really, that was amazing.

[Kelrik Frostbane]

Thanks a bunch, took me about a good hour or two to make and edit all of it

[rolmaktara]

Matthew: When pigs fly. *sees a pig flying an airplane* ...
Danny: Okay, pay up.

[Kelrik Frostbane]

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[Aries96]

Trolololololo? Anyone feel like making fun of something? Then I'll show you one a' muh poems . . . I WILL NOT BE EMBARESSEDEDEDDEED!!